Linked Verse

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2004年09月16日 02:52 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed line 104 from:

waking up with you\\

to:

waking up with you;\\

Changed lines 112-114 from:

cottonmouth sunning
by the Little Dutchman CreekLittleDutchman
Come See MeComeSeeMeかな

to:

Cottonmouth sunning
By the Little Dutchman CreekLittleDutchman,
Will you Come See Me?ComeSeeMe

Changed lines 130-131 from:

Into the No-Rock-Hill The sound of No-Cicadas

to:

Into the No-Rock-Hill
The sound of No-Cicadas\\

2004年09月16日 02:49 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed line 125 from:

and the soul is a moth (こころ飛ぶ蛾)\\

to:

and the soul is a moth (こころは飛ぶ蛾)\\

2004年09月16日 02:48 AM by BoxCarl -
Added lines 129-141:

Ah! the noise;
Into the No-Rock-Hill The sound of No-Cicadas penetrating

How relentlessly they scatter!
The calendar pages
This spring

Tomorrow’s slacks
On today’s floor—
How quickly life goes by!

2004年08月09日 11:18 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed line 24 from:

強く吹くのに\\

to:

強く吹けども\\

Added lines 129-133:
 苦づのよう
 友さを長く
 夏の日に

Like the kudzu vine/ I hope our friendship grows long/ in the summer sun

2004年06月17日 12:56 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 122-128 from:
 春行くぞ		Mourns departing Spring
to:
 春行くぞ		Mourns departing Spring

summer moon (夏の月)
and the soul is a moth (こころ飛ぶ蛾)
but the body
earthbound (身は毛虫)

2004年06月11日 10:02 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed line 41 from:
             石處々 rocks higglety pigglety
to:
             石處々 rocks higgledy-piggledy
2004年06月06日 09:18 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 118-122 from:

rainy day Rock Hill

to:

rainy day Rock Hill

 世をすてた		Discarding the world
 前にワーホー		But first at the Waffle House
 春行くぞ		Mourns departing Spring 
2004年05月04日 07:12 AM by BoxCarl -
Added lines 100-103:

Intoxicated
by her beauty, blah blah blah
and then we broke up

2004年04月20日 05:26 AM by BoxCarl -
Added lines 96-99:

愛すべき (I should love you)
でも、夏がくる (But when summer comes)
別れかな (I suppose we shall part)

Changed line 114 from:

rainy day Rock Hill

to:

rainy day Rock Hill

2004年04月15日 09:58 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 102-110 from:

—http://deadhobosociety.com/haiku/viewHaiku.php?TextId=52 Buson

to:

—http://deadhobosociety.com/haiku/viewHaiku.php?TextId=52 Buson

cottonmouth sunning
by the Little Dutchman CreekLittleDutchman
Come See MeComeSeeMeかな

the muddy red clay
on my boots and in my car—
rainy day Rock Hill

2004年04月06日 10:46 PM by Earthbound kid -
Added lines 27-30:
             reading my letters
             should everyone but you write
             still my heart would ache
2004年04月03日 11:27 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 96-97 from:

Now each and every night will end Dawning in white plum blossoms

to:

Now each and every night will end
Dawning in white plum blossoms\\

2004年04月03日 11:27 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 90-98 from:

feeling emptier.

to:

feeling emptier.

waking up with you
but in my dreams all last night
you were someone else

Now each and every night will end Dawning in white plum blossoms —http://deadhobosociety.com/haiku/viewHaiku.php?TextId=52 Buson

2004年04月03日 12:09 AM by ellis -
Changed lines 86-90 from:
    一人かな
to:
    一人かな

crumpled sheets
sweat dries, sticky residue
feeling emptier.

2004年03月29日 04:38 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed line 53 from:
           洋梨?咲くと
to:
           洋梨咲くと
2004年03月29日 03:31 PM by 68.159.126.169 -
Changed lines 56-57 from:

beneath fractal trees and cold, sad stars

to:

beneath fractal trees
and cold, sad stars\\

2004年03月29日 03:31 PM by 68.159.126.169 -
Changed line 53 from:
           洋梨�咲くと
to:
           洋梨?咲くと
Added lines 56-58:

beneath fractal trees and cold, sad stars i can’t help but sigh

2004年03月28日 09:02 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 78-83 from:

crescent moon and clouds

to:

crescent moon and clouds

 (ホーボーの生活って)
     寒い夜
    火の前に我
    一人かな
2004年03月28日 05:50 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed line 53 from:
           洋梨�さくと
to:
           洋梨�咲くと
2004年03月25日 10:22 PM by Captain Amerika -
Changed lines 65-66 from:

memories rippleflags on poles\

to:

memories ripple
flags on poles\\

Changed lines 74-78 from:
    We answered: “No cheese, no bees, no trees.”
to:
    We answered: “No cheese, no bees, no trees.”

wafting from my bed
is the scent of her perfume;
crescent moon and clouds

2004年03月24日 09:39 AM by ellis -
Added lines 65-68:

memories rippleflags on polestoo high to reach.

2004年03月18日 05:55 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed line 49 from:
           as the bradford pears blossom
to:
           as the http://www.completesquare.org/archives/000186.php bradford pears blossom
2004年03月18日 02:10 PM by BoxCarl -
Added lines 61-64:

春雨や (Oh, spring rain)
腹がふわふわ (My stomach flutters)
思出かな (Could it be memories?)

2004年03月18日 02:07 PM by earthbound kid -
Changed lines 59-66 from:

barely touching.

to:

barely touching.

 “My Vacation”
    By http://www.floridatoday.com/space/explore/stories/1999b/071899b.htm Neil Armstrong
    Nine summers ago, I went for a visit,
    To see if the moon was green cheese.
    When we arrived, people on earth asked: “Is it?”
    We answered: “No cheese, no bees, no trees.”
2004年03月15日 11:38 PM by ellis -
Changed lines 54-59 from:
            くさいカニ
to:
            くさいカニ

bamboo canopy
rain slips through, elusive
barely touching.

2004年03月13日 02:48 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 53-54 from:
           洋梨�

くと

to:
           洋梨�さくと
2004年03月13日 02:48 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 53-54 from:
to:
           洋梨�
2004年03月13日 02:48 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 50-54 from:
to:
            stinking crab meat smell

          好きな子や
           洋梨
2004年03月13日 01:02 PM by BoxCarl -
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            rotten crab meat stink
to:
            stinking crab meat smell
2004年03月13日 12:56 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 46-50 from:

wilting flowers

to:

wilting flowers

          oh, my would-be love,
           as the bradford pears blossom
            rotten crab meat stink
2004年03月12日 05:10 PM by ellis -
Changed lines 42-46 from:

fallen autumn leaves

to:

fallen autumn leaves

a season of change
careful arrangements
wilting flowers

2004年03月12日 01:14 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 38-42 from:
         (http://deadhobosociety.com/haiku/viewHaiku.php?TextId=13 Buson)
to:
         (http://deadhobosociety.com/haiku/viewHaiku.php?TextId=13 Buson)

scattered on my floor
old drafts, papers, notes, reports
fallen autumn leaves

2004年03月11日 10:08 PM by BoxCarl -
Added lines 34-38:
         柳散  willow bare
           清水涸 clear stream dried up
             石處々 rocks higglety pigglety
         (http://deadhobosociety.com/haiku/viewHaiku.php?TextId=13 Buson)
2004年03月11日 09:39 PM by 209.111.103.205 -
Added lines 30-33:

love makes me tired
the ocean crashing always
wears down rocks

2004年03月01日 10:49 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed line 24 from:

強く吹くのに\\

to:

強く吹くのに\\

Deleted line 29:
2004年03月01日 10:44 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 3-17 from:

?????
????
?????
( still in winter’s love / can’t fall / but I mended)

????
?????
?????
(now today, my lonely heart, a lone familiar)

??
???
??????
????
( blew love:how strongly though autumn winds/ life )

to:

冬終わりぬ
また恋に
落ちられず

still in winter’s love
can’t fall
but I mended

けふ一人
我がさび心
なつかしい

now today
my lonely heart
a lone familiar
 blew love:how strongly though autumn winds/  life  

命:
秋の風
強く吹くのに\\ 愛しけり

It is very early
I’m a bit tired
but there’s still much work to do

2004年03月01日 08:34 AM by sleepinsafety -
Changed lines 3-6 from:

冬終わりぬ
また恋に
落ちられず
(winter’s ended/ but I still can’t/ fall in love)

to:

?????
????
?????
( still in winter’s love / can’t fall / but I mended)

Changed lines 8-11 from:

けふ一人
我がさび心
なつかしい
(alone today, my lonely heart, how familiar)

to:

????
?????
?????
(now today, my lonely heart, a lone familiar)

Changed lines 13-17 from:

命:
秋の風
強く吹くのに
愛しけり
(life: though autumn winds/ blew strong/ how lovely)

to:

??
???
??????
????
( blew love:how strongly though autumn winds/ life )

Deleted lines 18-20:

It is very early
I’m a bit tired
but there’s still much work to do\\

2004年03月01日 04:03 AM by 24.145.225.90 -
Added lines 19-21:

It is very early
I’m a bit tired
but there’s still much work to do\\

2004年03月01日 12:00 AM by BoxCarl -
Changed line 1 from:

Please add to this list of haiku/haiku-like poetry as you see fit. English, Japanese, Latin, whatever. It’d be nice if one haiku led into another in some subtle way, but if that doesn’t happen, it’s still cool. If you can fix up the page by changing a poem or reordering them, also good. Use \\ at the end of each line to force line breaks.

to:

Please add to this list of haiku/haiku-like poetry as you see fit. English, Japanese, Latin, whatever. It’d be nice if one haiku led into another in some subtle way, but if that doesn’t happen, it’s still cool. If you can fix up the page by changing a poem or reordering them, also good. Use \\ at the end of each line to force line breaks.

Changed lines 17-18 from:

(life: though autumn winds/ blew strong/ how lovely)

to:

(life: though autumn winds/ blew strong/ how lovely)

2004年02月29日 11:59 PM by BoxCarl -
Changed lines 1-17 from:

Describe LinkedVerse here.

to:

Please add to this list of haiku/haiku-like poetry as you see fit. English, Japanese, Latin, whatever. It’d be nice if one haiku led into another in some subtle way, but if that doesn’t happen, it’s still cool. If you can fix up the page by changing a poem or reordering them, also good. Use \\ at the end of each line to force line breaks.

冬終わりぬ
また恋に
落ちられず
(winter’s ended/ but I still can’t/ fall in love)

けふ一人
我がさび心
なつかしい
(alone today, my lonely heart, how familiar)

命:
秋の風
強く吹くのに
愛しけり
(life: though autumn winds/ blew strong/ how lovely)